Script Development

Throughout the course of writing the script for my documentary, I made various amendments post feedback. After the first feedback I got I made changes to the detail of the descriptions of the rooms, I added more camera directions and information on how the shot looks. Then after those changes were made I added the off screen icons '(O.S)' next to each 'interviewer' tag line to show I am not in the shot during the interviews. I have also made adjustments to the synopsis and log line on the front page, describing a little more about what the documentary is about and the main content throughout. Overall the feedback was very useful and helped me understand how a script works for a documentary.