Rough Cut and Peer Feedback

For our documentary to develop we were asked to present a rough cut to the class.
The feedback I received helped me to expand my video and add things I had not thought of which helped my documentary take better shape.

The main things people commented on were:
 - The pace of the video
 - The length of the introduction
 - swapping in and out of interviews and cut aways
 - The context being interesting and different
 - The message in the film